Free choice #2
This is a short excerpt from a script that i was writing at the beginning of the year. It is about a young girl, Mariana, who is ill and her brother, Edan, and his best friend, Shaun, are doing their best to try and help her and cure her of her illness, but they are running low on money and her illness is getting worse. The more Edan struggles with his sister being so sick as well as his situation leads up to him acquiring the ability to set things on fire just by touching them. The name “Edan” actually means fire and was one of the inspirations for this piece.
“Footsteps are heard. A man limps over to the phone “hello? 9-11.”
Shaun: “Are we really going to do this?”
Edan: “I don’t know; we need the money. She’s not getting any better.”
Shaun: “But that woman, she’s so old and it just wouldn’t be right.”
Edan: “I know I know…but Mariana is so young, she needs a chance to live her life, and we know that that woman has no one to leave her things too.”
Silence
Mariana(laying down): *cough*
Shaun: “I’ll go check on her.”
Moments pass.
Shaun: “How are you feeling?”
Mariana: “Alright *cough* how’s Edan?”
Shaun: “He’s good, he’s worried about you though.”
Mariana: “Tell him not to worry, i’ll be fine.*cough*”
Shaun: “I have, he’s just, not in a good place right now.”
Mariana: “Is he going to be alright?”
Shaun: “Yeah, he just loves you and he can’t imagine…(doesn’t want to hint at her death but it’s there)… you should go to sleep; it’s getting late”
Mariana: “Okay, could you please send Edan in here first?”
Shaun: “Of course.”
Shaun exits and Edan enters
Edan: You wanted to speak with me Mariana?
Mariana: I will be alright Edan, and when this is all over we can go back it how it used to be, okay? You really don’t need to worry so much, it’s not good for you.
Edan thinks about many ways he could argue but he looks deeply at his sister and doesn’t want her to worry about him
Edan: Okay. Get some sleep, I’ll talk to you tomorrow.
Mariana: Alright, Goodnight, I love you.
Edan: I love you too, goodnight.
Scene change to Edan having a vivid nightmare.
Everything in the house is burning and he is trying to save everyone. He hears Shaun calling out to him, telling him to find Mariana, and Edan desperately fights through the fire until the whole roof starts to collapse and he wakes up.”